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Rewriting – At Last! A Theme?

| July 2, 2011

Last month, on May 5 to be exact, I began the process of rewriting Perfect Opportunities and submitting it to a couple of crit groups for objective opinions. My goal was to submit one chapter per week until the novel was complete. I began the process knowing there would be things to change, tighten, improve, [...]

Rewriting – Gleaning Past Efforts

| June 4, 2011

Some stories are easy to write the first time through. It’s in the second (third, fourth, fifth, etc., etc., etc.) draft that things get sticky. Anyone who has been writing for any length of time knows stories sometimes resist every effort at completion. Something stands in the way. A problem with characters. A problem with [...]

Saving Grace & Coursework

| March 4, 2010

After several days of dedicated prayer and a day of fasting, I’ve decided to give Saving Grace a sabbatical and myself a much needed break. The questions that prompted that decision still need to be answered, but they are no longer dominant. In their place is a quietness of mind that lets me know it’s [...]

Saving Grace: Finished for the Week

| January 30, 2010

I had hoped to have the Saving Grace snowflake finished by this time, but that didn’t happen. Even so, it was a great week for writing. Today, I worked on Step Eight, which is listing the scenes. It’s less of a creative process and more of a sequencing process at this stage because the story [...]

Decisions Set Up Decisions

| January 26, 2010

It doesn’t matter how carefully a first draft is crafted or how well the foundation is built, there are changes between the drafts. Loose ends to tie up. Redundancies to eliminate. Plots to tighten. Dialog to clarify. Sometimes names and locations get changed, too. In other words, everything is subject to change. With a first [...]

Saving Grace: Taking Stock

| January 19, 2010

At some point in every story, there comes a time when writing, plotting, character and story development stops and stock taking begins. It could be a day spent pondering plot dilemmas in the middle of a first draft or it could be a couple of weeks spent brooding between drafts. To an interested observer, it [...]

If It Were Easy…

| January 13, 2010

Sometimes life is easy. Sometimes life is hard. The same goes for painting and for writing and for every other human endeavor. I remind myself of that principle every time I hit a snag in anything. I also tell myself that if something was easy, everybody would be doing it. I’ve had to remind myself [...]

Working Through the Second Draft

| January 9, 2010

Second drafts in particular and rewriting in general is like eating oatmeal for breakfast. Most of the time, it’s not something I prefer to do, but it’s good for me, so I do it. I’ve been working on the rewrite of Saving Grace five days now and have made a lot of progress. The first [...]

Saving Grace: Second Draft Begins

| January 7, 2010

Saving Grace officially entered the second draft phase on Tuesday, January 5, 2010. It took three days to do the first reading and analysis, one-and-a-half days for each phase. It had been my hope to move directly from analysis to second draft while still in Michigan. When we left, I thought I had every file [...]

Saving Grace: The Second Round Begins

| December 26, 2009

Christmas Day brought two things to me this year. A day of quiet and rest after the drive from Newton, Kansas to Clare, Michigan; of eating leftovers from the annual Christmas Eve Dinner and of lounging around the house with Mom and family members I haven’t seen since October and, of course, snow! But it [...]